Miss Kari

[kari]

Hello,
My name is 'Kari' and I am appealing to you guys to give me a little insite as to what I am doing wrong? I had taken an ad out in 'Now' Magazine a couple weeks ago and have also posted my information on The Red Zone but all I am getting is calls in regards to questions. I do have my friend, who is male, answering the phone for me, is this a problem? What my question is, why am I not getting any customers? Please look at my web site and let me know how I can improve, or what I am doing wrong, or what I should be doing, thank you for your help.
http://misskari2004.tripod.com

 

[mrhockey]

Well... first off it's always a bit of a put off for me to call and talk to a male... just uncomfortable to me at least.

Second, stats on the page would be nice and a little more specific as to what areas you prefer. And maybe put something on the page as to what you enjoy in your time with a gentleman (whats on the menu so to speak).

Third, as soon as you get a positive review or two you should start seeing an improvement in business.

Hope this helps a little.

 

[kari]

Hello,
Thank You 'Mr. Hockey' but I thought I put that information in my ads? outcalls, my rate, my measurements, how I dress, service the GTA, I am missing something?
http://www.theredzone.com/toronto/misskari/

 

[mrhockey]

Kari,

Check your PM's

 

[xarir]

My $0.02

I agree with six. The use of third person is odd and for me is also a put-off. When I read the bio as it`s written, I`m led to wonder "Who wrote this?" The natural follow-up to that is "Is this bio actually true or is this B&S?" If I`m wondering if it`s B&S, I`m not going to go and find out first hand. So I`ll skip the ad and move on.

Read this thread here: https://terb.cc/vbulletin/showthread.php?s=&threadid=47914

With a third-party bio, how are we to be sure that the above situation won`t be repeated? Anyone can write a bio and post a few pics from anywhere. On the other hand, a personal bio (first person) tends to be more believeable.

Also, I have no desire to speak to a receptionist. If I did, I`d call an agency. If I`m calling an independent, I want to speak with her directly. Voicemail is an acceptable alternative but I call with the assummption that I`ll be speaking to the indy directly and not through another person.

All the best Kari. Hope your biz picks up!

 

[Pallydin]

Maybe a small thing

Not sure how important this may be to you, but it can never hurt to go through things and clean up the grammar and general English so as to come across as more articulate (if you are at all interested in that angle). For instance, "give her some advancement notice".

Good luck,

PAL

 

[kumamake]

i also have to agree with six and xarir, i found it annoying to read, third party writing was not appleaing at all. browse the rst of add and u might get goods ideas on how to inform people of your services

 

[zydeco]

I agree with the others with respect to your male friend answering your phone. If at all possible, you are better off answering the calls yourself. Good Luck and welcome to Terb!

 

[baci2004]

Kari- I agree with curvygirl. I also feel it is important to have pro. designed site; for some reason *I* feel that if the site is looks classy, the girl will too. Check out www.hollywoodescorts.com The girls are hot, but really in the end it was the site that got me.
my two cents
Good luck!!!

 

[Not So Much]

Just A Thought.....

....First of all, you're very attractive, so it's only a matter of time before you get busy......Try to show a bit more of your face, perhaps with your hair hiding it. Guys love hair......You definitely need to put your statistics on the site....age, height weight measurements. .....

This all sounds like great advice. The age thing is also important as well as sometimes there is a "Goldilocks" thing going there:

"This one is to young, this one is too old, but this one is just right"

 

[BigBlack]

Get a friend to photoshop your pics so they look darker (skin tone more tanned). The images make your skin appear very pale, especially with the black undergarments, disorganized background and lighting. Same outfit, standing with rotated angles? It's not a mugshot or police lineup. Get multiple outfits, more creative poses (your body and jawline look very good). Fetishes are discussed but not displayed, ex., not 1 pair of leather boots, stockings, fetish outfits, or themed clothing ( like a nurse outfit, policewoman, mistress,ect).

The writting on the site hurts to read. Poor paragraph structure, run ons, boring content, bad use of colour and font. Use an informal conversational style. It doesn't do what a site should, which is communicate your character, and personality.

The purple ghostly framing looks like crap. Was it inspired by the movie Ghostbusters (who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!). Your gallery is poorly written, too fragmented, i.e., "


(1st pic) Call Me Now, Male Receptionist
(2nd pic) Outcalls
(3rd pic) $160 per Hour
(4th pic) Gentlemen Call "

You don't need a pro, anybody could switch around your tags, edit the writing and put better images in. With many, many changes, I can see you getting quite a large regular following around here. I'm getting a little excited looking at your pics already. For some ideas, check out the sites of the other girls and brainstorm. Have dinner with one of the experienced ladies and get some ideas about advertising and promotion.

BBLACK

 

[mrmike]

I would suggest a greater variety of pictures. You mention that you have a schoolgirl uniform, maid uniform, etc. so why not show what you look like in them?

I'm surprised how even some professional-seeming web sites make this mistake; a dozen pictures and only two different settings, poses or outfits.

It's hard to get an idea of the escort when you can't see her face, so different pictures, angles, styles etc. helps a lot.

 

[daty]

My 2 Cents

to be honest ...i almost did not give it a second look as the "Miss" Kari led me to think you were a dominatrix and while it is something that you may play in, it does not look like it is the focus of your services

THAT is my 2cents or $0.02 or 2% of a dollar

 

[Don]

I agree with most of the suggestions given here. The 3rd person reference is definitely strange. Also better quality photos would help. Especially in different settings like bigblack suggested (lingerie, outfits, poses, etc). The website does look a bit "rough". It may be worth it to hire a professional to put together a nice web page.