Website is ready!

[Trish_a]

Hi Again Terbies,

As I promessed you and some have already noticed, my website is now up and running! You'll recognize that I'm currently using the same pictures that were posted on Jasmins site. But expect new photographs soon!
www.fbsm-trish.com

Their is also a change in the e-mail used to contact me...
trish@fbsm-trish.com
Though, for the time being, I will still be verifying my other e-mail account.

Thanks for all you patients !

Trish xox

 

[Tragically_Glib]

Hi Again Terbies,

As I promessed you and some have already noticed, my website is now up and running! You'll recognize that I'm currently using the same pictures that were posted on Jasmins site. But expect new photographs soon!
www.fbsm-trish.com

Their is also a change in the e-mail used to contact me...
trish@fbsm-trish.com
Though, for the time being, I will still be verifying my other e-mail account.

Thanks for all you patients !

Trish xox

Hi Trish,
If you seen my earlier post (it sux) I apologize. I was only going to leave it there a few minutes to see if you would react. Well, I got sidetracked and forgot. I’m old, as you know the mind is the second thing that goes.

To make it up I’ll give you a free web consultation.

OK, I scrutinized your website with an intense scrut, here’s what I found:

1) The “Home“ menu button is incorrectly linked to “schedule.htm”

2) A menu button needs to be created for “schedule.htm”

3) Nowhere does it mention the city your business is located. I suggest you have this information on the “Home”, “schedule” and “Contact” pages.

4) You have no phone number, do you intend to work strictly by email? If so, I question this business decision.

5) I have been involved in the production of 100’s of websites, your “Close” button is a first for me. The fact that it actually closes the visitors browser is alarming, it annoyed me. I doubt anyone would expect that. The visitor may not want to lose the “Back – Forward” history or have his browser closed for other reasons. I recommend you get rid of it, visitors don’t like surprises.

6) You look great, would be nice to have a zoom option on your pics.

Other than that the base design is good, nice and clean.

 

[Trish_a]

comments much appreciated!

Thanks alot!
You've given me great suggestions that I intend to use for the site.
Your help is really appreciated!

Trish xox

 

[qwerty]

The thing I noticed most of all about Trish's website was the typos or the bad English translations. Made it hard to read.

 

[Tragically_Glib]

The thing I noticed most of all about Trish's website was the typos or the bad English translations. Made it hard to read.

THANK YOU!

LOL, I didn't want to say anything but you nailed it. Trish, the copy could use a little work. That's not my expertise but perhaps there is a Creative Writer here that would lend a hand.

Any volunteers?

 

[yeet]

5) I have been involved in the production of 100’s of websites, your “Close” button is a first for me. The fact that it actually closes the visitors browser is alarming, it annoyed me. I doubt anyone would expect that. The visitor may not want to lose the “Back – Forward” history or have his browser closed for other reasons. I recommend you get rid of it, visitors don’t like surprises.

I think the close button is handy. Allows you to quickly close if someone is coming.

 

[Tragically_Glib]

I think the close button is handy. Allows you to quickly close if someone is coming.

Ahhhh, I didn't look at it from that angle. I stand corrected!

I havn't played computer games in years but when I did most of them had a "Boss key". When you pressed it a Spreadsheet would pop-up over the game. I would label this button "Panic" rather than "Close", that I would have understood right away.

Thanks Yeet

 

[Trish_a]

change

Theirs been another change ....
the e-mail address used to contact me will remain as fbsm_trish@hotmail.com

Thanks again for everyone's help!